What I heard in Peer Review

Nadia peer reviewed my project. The most constructive thing she told me regarding my power point presentation was that the words I was using (under 5) were not significant enough to include on the slides. I realized I was just trying to use five words per slide, even when a visual slide with no words and an oral description would have been more appropriate. Second, she recommended that I use more screen shots in my web essay.

What I need to do

First, I need to focus on my presentation and make sure that all text I am using is helpful to my overall presentation. There are a few slides that I plan on editing.

Second, I need to take more screen shots for my essay. I knew this was one of the things I wanted to include in my project all along, but it seems to be among the last parts of the project I have completed. Although this is an easy fix, I need to make sure that my example timeline is in order and complete prior to taking these screen shots.