peer review of presentation

What I was told?
Molly gave me positive feedback, and reminded me of the 5 words per page of the presentation. She suggested that I take some text off, and just include screen shots that I could explain orally. She read through a bit of my essay (what had been written so far) and reminded me to think of it in sections. I had written the web essay just like a typical in class assignment, and it seemed difficult to figure out where it would be divided on my actual wordpress site.

What I need to do?
First of all, I need to finish up the presentation (ASAP) and imbed it into my site by Sunday night (tomorrow) before my presentation Monday morning. I would also like to finish my essay by the end of the day Tuesday so that it’s not hanging over my head. By making the presentation first, I have a clearer picture of what I want the paper to be divided into, for the different pages on my site.