Peer Review/Revision Plan

After having my rough cut reviewed by two other classmates, there are a few things that I need to change. I was told that the overall idea and the start of my graphic looks pretty good and is creative (which is the risk I’m taking by making a graphic from scratch).

Going forward I need to arrange my picture so it flows easier to the eye. It is currently a little scattered as far as being about to flow from one picture to the next within the graphic. I also need to clean up a few of the pictures and add a couple words to each. Currently, I only have a left arm and left leg illustrated, but should change that to illustrate both arms and legs just for clarification purposes.

The work I have left going forward is pretty simple. I need to make these minor changes to my graphic and then put the graphic in ThingLink. Once I do that I can add bubbles to each part of my graphic and then explain how each graphic debunks the idea that the Hokey Pokey “is what its all about.”