Because I was not in class today, I had one of my classmates, Doug Bowman, evaluate my Remix a Story Project. Since I had to redo my entire project mock-up, which actually took a very long time, I had him look over that and tell me what he thought. Overall, he said he liked the idea of the project, but there were still a couple things I had to work on. I had to make sure I emphasized the “basic-ness” of the characters more, because some of them just seemed like normal tweets. Also, Doug said I should try to add more tweets with pictures or other different characteristics because it could really enhance my final product. Besides those two things, he thought I was on the right track.

Revision Plan:

• Make characters more dramatic
• Create more special tweets