Revision Plan

Today I showed my peers my work and they enjoyed the film. They gave me positive feedback, as well as constructive criticism that I was able to use to edit my project. They agreed that I should have a constant theme, a similar font throughout. They also said that I should focus (and transition) between tweets, because the audience wouldn’t be able to read them. It was also recommended that I avoid placing words on top of the scene with tweets because of the “words on words” look. I have corrected a lot of these issues, and would like to continue to work on the transitions and potentially see if I should add anything else to the preview. If not, I will start working on my presentation this weekend, as I am signed up to present a week from today.