Revision Plan

I got great feedback and ideas about my project. After speaking with my reviewers, I know that I also want to create an owner testimonial as well as include an order form for purchasing toys. I think these are great ways to include more linguistic and visual aspects to my project.

In order to finish my project, I need to complete these pages and convert them to PDFs. I then need to upload them to my flip book for “publishing.”

Also, I need to determine the way I will present my project. I think it will be enough to open the flip book online and flip through the pages giving a brief description of each and my reasoning behind creating the individual aspects.


“Sometimes I hurt because I dance, other times I dance because I’m hurt. Either way, dancing fixes it all.”

-Unknown