One of the main strengths of my draft was the incorporation of all the modes of communication in my video. In addition, I was pretty successful in modernizing the story through the incorporation of modern music and also by making the “Franny” character seem more like a 20 something today, rather than a character from the…
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Peer Help
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Finishing the project, maybe add a what Mean Girl are you quiz to the project. Right now the deliverable aspect of my project is slacking slightly, so the main focus is to get the project completed and then reevaluate what needs to be added to make the work stronger. Currently, the rhetorical situations that I […]
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Revision Plan
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Last night I decided to change my project completely.Instead of creating pinterest boards for the dwarves, I will be making them into superheros. Each superhero will have their own unique set of powers displayed on a poster. During the peer review, my peers said they liked the project idea. They helped me come up with […]
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Revision Plan
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Today we had a peer review day, and my partners really helped me figure out some options for the format of my project. I have all of the basic elements, but the Google Slides presentation doesn’t do my project justice. My partners suggested I try creating a site on my blog so that the updates […]
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Peer Review
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Rough Cut of My Project: http://online.fliphtml5.com/pfxu/nvih/#p=2 Peer Review went well; it was really interesting to see my peers projects because they are all so creative. Grace and Caroline both liked that i’m using a combination of content from the 1920s but styling the magazine as a modern fashion magazine. The movie is a blend of…
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Peer Review
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April 22, 2015 In peer review, I received some great feedback on the first movie poster that I created, which was for Daisy. Overall, my partners really liked what I had done with my photo manipulation, but had a few issues with clarity and readability. In the coming days, I’ll keep an eye on that […]