Strengths:

The idea of live tweeting, the varying POV’s of the different people for the keynote

Problematic Design Choices & Fixes:

Live tweeting for 5 people is tough to do at once and there is no twitter handler that allows you to customize the time of tweets for 250+ tweets. The fix for this will be to use a different avenue like a faux chat client or something.

Out Of Place Rhetorical Choices & How to Attend to Audience/Purpose/Context/Genre:

The choice that was somewhat out of place is the fact that no super nerdy person would be using twitter and same goes for someone who is a super high official. Instead, id like to use something that better displays the group. As mentioned above, maybe a chat from ‘people from high school’ that have this dynamic.

Multimodal Elements that Can Be Added:

Visual (with photos) and linguistic (with good word choice)

Most Important Changes:

An avenue where I can put all the live tweets together and make it actually seem like twitter.

What Can/Can’t Be Easily Revised Before Due Date:

Everything can be revised and fixed before due date,