Revision Plan for Project 4

Overall, I think that I’m on a pretty good track for my project. I still have to complete the last section of the script for my broadcast in order to wrap it up, but the feedback that I got on it was extremely helpful and pointed out some things that I probably would have missed due to being to close to the project. I got ideas for things I would not have thought of, like throwing in a commercial break during the broadcast, as well as not using the characters names so much; all of which will help give the broadcast a more realistic effect. I’m also going to try to give each of the broadcasters their own, more unique personality which I hope will bring a little more dimension to it. Also, I still feel like I could edit the script multiple more times for content because there is more that I can add to it.