Overall, I think that I’m on a pretty good track for my project. I still have to complete the last section of the script for my broadcast in order to wrap it up, but the feedback that I got on it was extremely helpful and pointed out some things that I probably would have missed […]
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Strengths When my group looked at my project they liked my idea and the setup. They liked the instagram posts and the fact that I used a flipbook. Problems They suggested that if there was a way that I could make it look more like an instagram feed that would be cool but if not…
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Revision for Project 4
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Strengths I should keep both narration and dialogue. I have good organization and planning. I have an extensive list of my props. I have a complete and creative script. What I Should Be Aware Of I should maybe use iMovie instead of Premiere. I should be flexible in case I need to change locations during […]
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Strengths of draft: Overall the strengths were that the website looked similar to a news website with flashy texts and it was visually dynamic for the audience. They liked how it looked, and the overall theme of the website. They liked the text layout, and they thought the texts all made sense, and thought that […]
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What I Did #16
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Draft of Project: Revision plan: What I heard: Both of my partners really liked the concept of my project. In terms of the drawings, they said I should make them modern (rather than doing the typical Disney depiction). And that in terms of color I should either follow the old black […]
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In peer review today, it was suggested that I Photoshop images to incorporate underwater architecture and images of the submarine that the crew is on in order to make the images look more like they are from 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea. This has really helped me make a decision on how I’m going to […]