Today we did a peer review session for a Remix a Story projects.

My Revision Plan

My strength for this draft thus far is my story line.  My peers thought that the content of my tweets and flow of the story made sense.  When I told them about the editing of the images and putting all of my information into a prezi, they also liked those ideas. One of the design choices that was problematic was the fact that I didn’t plan on having words to go along in the presentation.  My peers think it would be a good idea to have a overview story line within the presentation to help the reader understand exactly what is happening and to make the story flow better.  Since I haven’t started making the actual presentation yet, I think that this revision plan will be definitely attainable.