Because I was not in class today, I had one of my classmates, Doug Bowman, evaluate my Remix a Story Project. Since I had to redo my entire project mock-up, which actually took a very long time, I had him look over that and tell me what he thought. Overall, he said he liked the […]
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Project 4 Draft Revision Plan
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• What were the strengths of my draft that I should be sure to keep? • What design choices were problematic, and how can I revise these? • What rhetorical choices seemed out of place in my draft, and how can I better attend to my audience, purpose, context, and genre? • What multimodal elements […]
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Remix A Story Peer Review Feedback & Revision Plan
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What were the strengths of my draft that I should be sure to keep? Organization of the Pinterest account. What design choices were problematic and how can I revise these? Since I am using Pinterest everything is organized a clean, neat fashion. Combining different boards by moving the the pins from one board to the […]
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Peer Edit
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4/22/15 Today we peer edited in groups of three and received feedback on our projects so far. I am a huge planner and therefore have planned out every detail on paper to show my group. I also showed them the shell of my blog and focused on my media page. I knew it wasn’t looking […]
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Revised Plan for Project
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Strengths: The idea of live tweeting, the varying POV’s of the different people for the keynote Problematic Design Choices & Fixes: Live tweeting for 5 people is tough to do at once and there is no twitter handler that allows you to customize the time of tweets for 250+ tweets. The fix for this will […]
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Revision Plan
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For today’s class, I brought in a rough cut of my film. Because I only finished filming yesterday, I’ve only got the first major scene in order. My reviewers suggested that my transitions needed strengthening. While I agree, they provided me with some pretty insightful feedback as to how I may improve it. One suggestion […]