Today I showed my peers my work and they enjoyed the film. They gave me positive feedback, as well as constructive criticism that I was able to use to edit my project. They agreed that I should have a constant theme, a similar font throughout. They also said that I should focus (and transition) between […]
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revisionPlan()
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Today we did a peer review session for a Remix a Story projects. My Revision Plan My strength for this draft thus far is my story line. My peers thought that the content of my tweets and flow of the story made sense. When I told them about the editing of the images and putting […]
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Revision Plan
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I got great feedback and ideas about my project. After speaking with my reviewers, I know that I also want to create an owner testimonial as well as include an order form for purchasing toys. I think these are great ways … Continue reading →
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Peer Reviewing & Revision Plan
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In peer review, I presented what I have designed so far for my infographic. My peers gave me feedback on both strengths and weaknesses: Strengths included my overall design. My peers liked that I’m creating a timeline. They liked my font and color selection, and how the infographic was designed towards the audience. They also […]
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Revision Plan!
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after sharing my project with two of my classmates, there are a few things i need to do: i really want to keep the content and the overall “story” i’m […]
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4/22 Peer Review
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Peer review went really well today. We got to talk out some of the issues we were facing in our projects-three brains are better than one, right? I was originally nervous that people wouldn’t really get the concept behind my project. So, as an introduction to my project I showed a little clip from the […]